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Explanation Essay – Plan Practice: G.I is the best community in NZ

G.I is the best community in NZ

  1. There are lots of schools, which gives kids lot’s of learning opportunities.

  • Pt England

  • Tamaki College

  • Ruapotaka Primary

  1. Everyone in the community is unique.

  • LGBT

  • Pacific

  • People with disabilities

  1. There are many places that people around the community can connect and have fun.

  • Te Oro

  • Library 

  • Beach/Reserve 


Task Description:

This week we are learning about Explanation Essays. To write a good essay, you have to have a good plan, so that is what we practised today. I came up with 3 ideas and then added some bullet points/reasons why they make G.I a good place.

Korero of the Week – W2 Play The Right Way


This weeks korero was Play The Right Way. We explained a few tips on how to have a happy and fun playtime. Here are the people who contributed to this slide:









New Zealands Borders Open up – Kiwi Kids News Summary

New Zealand’s Prime Minster, Jacinda Ardern has announced that New Zealand’s border will open.This announcement was last week, and will only allow fully vaccinated New Zealanders into the country. Along with other eligible travellers from Australia back into New Zealand, this will happen on the 27th of Feb. This border will open in stages starting at the end of February. It will be the first time New Zealand has opened up for nearly two years. Two weeks later, fully Vaccinated people, from all countries can visit NZ.


Writing Challenge: Six Sentences – TikTok Famous in Samoa

Breaking News! A palangi man that goes by the name of Sour Goodwin, is roaming the streets of Samoa. This TikTok famous, exuberant eagle and renegading rockstar has taken the TikTok world by storm, when he threatened to ban the app for all citizens of Samoa. The description of the man has been released, he has been seen wearing a hippie man bun, with unpleasantly tight trousers. We have an update, Sour Goodwin has been swept away by the aftermath of the tsunami in Tonga, his last words being “save my phone-”….

Minnie Mouse Makeover! – Kiwi Kids News Summary

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Minnie Mouse was created over 100 years ago, and is getting a makeover. She’s ditching her red polka dot dress, for a blue polka dot blazer with matching trousers. The creator of the look, Stella McCartney, has made it in honour of Women’s History Month. Minnie’s classic red bow has been swapped for a blue one, and her yellow shoes for black ones.

Explanation Essay – My Dream Home

Reading the nutrition daily, floating up my elevator stairs or staring at a statue of Lord Farkward. Either one, today I am going to be talking about My Dream Home. I will be explaining the elements I want, to make my life more luxurious and full. 

The pantries in my house would be the size of a walk in closet. It wouldn’t only have dry foods, but also refrigerated foods. Half of the pantry would be a fridge/freezer, stocked with fruits, vegetables, meat and much more. The other half would hold my dry foods which would be chips, rice, flour etc. Along with a nutrition pad for all of my health needs.

It’s hard walking up stairs, but also boring waiting for the elevator. So I would have multiple escalators all over my house. This would make it more easy and efficient for my body to get from place to place. 

In my personal opinion, Lord Farkward is a handsome cartoon character. I would love to have him in my house, but of course he is fiction. So I would have to make him into a big, bold statue. Having him made out of gold, with diamonds encrusted into his crystally eyes. 

From big pantries to big statues, those are the things I would want in My Dream House. There are many other things I would want in this “Dream House” of mine, but these are the must-haves. Could this house be more than a dream?


Korero of the Week – W1 Kawa of Covid/Covid Reminders

This week was our first assembly of 2022. We had to make a presentation to explain the korero, which was Kawa of Covid. Check out the slide to learn more! I made this with my friend/prefect Aye. Check out here blog here: Enjoy 🙂

About Me – Kiarah 2022


Malo e lelei,

My name is Kiarah. I am a Year Eight student this year, and I’m in Room Four of Team Five at Pt England School. I have three teachers this year, Miss Hall and Mrs Stone who teach my home/maths class. With Mr Moran teaching my literacy class, he is the home class teacher of Room One.

Last year I was a new Year Seven to the Team Five block. This year I am proud to say that I am a Year Eight Prefect, I lead the school with seven other students. I hope to get far this year and do the best I can with the new position I hold.

 Sports have become a big part of my life, it has helped me become stronger physically and mentally. In past years I have played Tag, Softball, Basketball and my main sport Netball. For this year we will just have to wait and see what comes next.

I aspire to be a lawyer when I get older, as I enjoy debating and helping others in need. This job has been a dream of mine since I was just seven years old.

I can’t wait to see everything that a new year and new me brings!

If you would like to see my previous blog posts, this is my blog from Year’s One-Seven:

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